I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
I like that you are trying new things on your blog work such as an animation! Your post hasn't really explained what you've been learning about in science. Some more detail in your introduction about the topic or some of the key words you've been discussing in class would be helpful to us who don't know what the task is!
Great effort though on your creativity! - Miss Birtch
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
This looks like fun, Hayley. It would have taken you a long time doing, all the different colours. Very clever.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Hayley!
ReplyDeleteI like that you are trying new things on your blog work such as an animation! Your post hasn't really explained what you've been learning about in science. Some more detail in your introduction about the topic or some of the key words you've been discussing in class would be helpful to us who don't know what the task is!
Great effort though on your creativity!
- Miss Birtch