I was dancing through the studio, leaping and twirling. I love ballet, I have since I could walk. Today I was practising in my private studio that I paid for because I worked at a top end restaurant. The song was called The Flying Feather which my grandmother had written for me. I taught myself the dance, it was quite hard but I knew I could do it. But it was difficult for me because my grandmother had just passed and I missed her so much but I knew I had to keep going. I danced and danced but I just couldn’t get it right so I went for a walk to the graveyard to talk to her. I put flowers in the pot and said “ I love you grandma “ Then I walked back to the studio. I decided that this one was going to be the one where I didn’t muck up and I think going to the graveyard worked because I didn’t muck up and I stayed strong. Which was the best thing I could do.
I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Tuesday, 4 August 2020
200 Word Challenge
Today in wananga instead of doing a 100 Word Challenge we did a 200 Word Challenge. Also we did a piece of music from the movie Forest Gump. Here is my writing and the music. Enjoy.
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love your choice of music to dance too Hayley. This is a beautiful story.
ReplyDeleteHayley, I love this! This reminds me so much of my experience dancing to this song when I was younger. This song is from a favourite movie I share with my dad and I remember he came to watch my competition and it was nice to share my dancing with him. Your writing totally transported me back to that time with your imagery of doing ballet and dancing on the stage!
ReplyDelete- Miss Birtch
WOW! I love this story. Very well written Hayley. These word challenges are showing off your imagination and thoughts so well xxxx
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Hayley,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your story about ballet it reminded me of when I was little and did ballet I really liked your choice of words for this story as well.
- Shelby
Kia Ora Hayley,
ReplyDeleteI really love reading your story and the words u used.
Have a great day!
-Khyle
I love your choice of music, Hayley. It shows your artistic nature.
ReplyDeleteHi Hayley. You are very creative and I loved your Blog Post.
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