Top Team Extravaganza

Top Team Extravaganza   21.11.16

Today we had top Team. Top team is a lot of activities and most of them involve water.

For Top Team we were in groups. In my group I had Me, Tyson, Emily.V, Loreen and Philip. All together there were 7 activities and they were all so thrilling and energetic and I had so much fun. On all of the activities my team worked really well together.

One of the activities were Map Hop you had to put apart of New Zealand on the grass and step onto the pieces until you get to the white flag, Then you have to build the south island and the north island. My team got all of the south island together and part of the north island together. So my team got 5 and a half points.

Overall I think Top Team is super thrilling in the activities  and the way we all had so much fun. I recommend the teachers asking the top team company if they could come to your school and you and the others could have so much fun.

A sticky situation

For writing be had to write about a crazy thing! we have to persuade people to buy it read on to find out what it is!

A Sticky situation       8/11/16

Introduction Hook / questions (no more than 3) Are you tired of having the same old thing? Do you want something to make your day? Do you need to get out of sticky situations? Introduce your stick - What you are selling Then I offer you this stick-tastic stick! Its 100% natural, raw stick. Its 0% fake. You should have this stick because It won’t leaf  you behind.
	Elaborate, explain or give evidence
Main Point Paragraph 1 Help you	It will help you on a hiking trip It will help you get the leftover mashed potatoes out of the saucepan
Main Point Paragraph 2 Useful for pets to play with	It can be like a bone to a dog  It can be a back scratcher to a cat
Main Point Paragraph 3 Keep you company	It will stick a smile on your face It will be your friend that will stick next to you forever
Conclusion/ summary Overall, I think you should have this stick because it will help you, save you and keep you company that's why I think you should have a stick. So go to your local garden centre now and get the stick of you dreams!!!

Reasons

Elaboration

Persuasive Vocab

A sticky situation

Are you tired of having the same old thing? Do you want something to make your day? Do you need to get out of sticky situations? Then I introduce you this stick! It´s a 100% natural, raw stick. Its 0% fake. You should have this stick because It won’t leaf  you behind. It will help you, save you and It can be a great pet toy.  Read on and find more information about this stick.

Firstly, I think you should have this fantas- stick one of a kind thing because it will help you in many situations. It can help you on a hiking trip because it is nice and thick. I can stick into the ground and make a trail of big holes behind you. It can also help you by getting the leftover mashed potatoes out of the saucepan. This will have a nice pointy end so you can get the rest out, so you are not wasting the nice cooking.

The truth about this stick is It can be a great play to for your pets.  For cats it can be a back scratcher. whenever they have an itch they can carry the stick in their mouth and find a nice place to have a scratch. For a dog It can kind of be a bone to them. They can barrie it the dig it up again to play with it.

Lastly, you should get this stick because it will keep you company. It will do this by sticking a smile on your face. You will be so happy to have this stick. It will also keep you company by being your friend that will stick next to you forever until your last days.

Overall, I think you should have this stick because it will help you, be a great pet toy and keep you company. That's why I think you should have a stick. So go to your local garden centre now and get the stick of you dreams!!!

Snowflakes

For some fun I made a snowflake, and viewed it in still mode, 3D mode and 2D mode. Here is the link to the site to make A snowflake.  http://www.zefrank.com/snowflake/

Plan For Uniform

For writing this week I posted a pecice of writing and this is my plan for it. I hope you can see the learning and the hard work i have put into this.

Plan

Introduction Hook Mr Moriarty, it’s time to get out with the old and in with the new. What is the argument? I believe if we get a new school, we should get a new uniform.
	Elaborate, explain or give evidence
Main Point Paragraph 1 New Start	Show Off our uniform to others If we get a new school a new uniform is the best way to go
Main Point Paragraph 2 Time to show who South Hornby really is	Attractive to other families Show off the new you
Main Point Paragraph 3 Winter summer Uniform	Warmer thicker clothes for winter Light breezy clothes for summer
Conclusion / Summary Overall, I think We should get a new uniform because It is a new start, A show on who we really are and It can be a winter and summer uniform. I think if we get a new uniform it would be a great change for this school.

New uniform...

For writing we have been learning about persuasive writing. Hope you enjoy!!!

New School, New look

Mr Moriarty, it’s time to get out with the old and in with the new. I believe if we get a new school, we should get a new uniform.  Three reasons why we should get a new uniform are It is a new start, A show on who we really are and It can be a winter and summer uniform. Read on to find out some more information.

Firstly, we should have a new uniform because It's a new start for us. It is a new start because we can show it off to others who will come to our school. Another reason why is if we get a new school a new uniform would be the best way to go.

Secondly, we should have a new uniform because it is time to show who south hornby really is. If we do this it will attract other families and it will also show off the new you. This could really help to make our school popular.

Lastly, we should have a new uniform because it could be a winter summer uniform. It could be this if Mr Moriarty got Warmer thicker clothes for winter and Light breezy clothes for summer.

Overall, I think We should get a new uniform because It is a new start, A show on who we really are and It can be a winter and summer uniform. I think if we get a new uniform it would be a great change for this school.

The Moon

This is what I have been learning about the moon. Hope you enjoy!!!