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Thursday, 17 November 2016

A sticky situation

For writing be had to write about a crazy thing! we have to persuade people to buy it read on to find out what it is!
A Sticky situation       8/11/16


Introduction
Hook / questions (no more than 3)
Are you tired of having the same old thing? Do you want something to make your day?
Do you need to get out of sticky situations?

Introduce your stick - What you are selling
Then I offer you this stick-tastic stick! Its 100% natural, raw stick. Its 0% fake. You should have this stick because It won’t leaf  you behind.




Elaborate, explain or give evidence
Main Point
Paragraph 1

Help you
  • It will help you on a hiking trip




  • It will help you get the leftover mashed potatoes out of the saucepan
Main Point
Paragraph 2
Useful for pets to play with

  • It can be like a bone to a dog


  •  It can be a back scratcher to a cat
Main Point
Paragraph 3

Keep you company
  • It will stick a smile on your face



  • It will be your friend that will stick next to you forever
Conclusion/ summary
Overall, I think you should have this stick because it will help you, save you and keep you company that's why I think you should have a stick. So go to your local garden centre now and get the stick of you dreams!!!


Reasons
Elaboration
Persuasive Vocab
A sticky situation

Are you tired of having the same old thing? Do you want something to make your day? Do you need to get out of sticky situations? Then I introduce you this stick! It´s a 100% natural, raw stick. Its 0% fake. You should have this stick because It won’t leaf  you behind. It will help you, save you and It can be a great pet toy.  Read on and find more information about this stick.

Firstly, I think you should have this fantas- stick one of a kind thing because it will help you in many situations. It can help you on a hiking trip because it is nice and thick. I can stick into the ground and make a trail of big holes behind you. It can also help you by getting the leftover mashed potatoes out of the saucepan. This will have a nice pointy end so you can get the rest out, so you are not wasting the nice cooking.

The truth about this stick is It can be a great play to for your pets.  For cats it can be a back scratcher. whenever they have an itch they can carry the stick in their mouth and find a nice place to have a scratch. For a dog It can kind of be a bone to them. They can barrie it the dig it up again to play with it.

Lastly, you should get this stick because it will keep you company. It will do this by sticking a smile on your face. You will be so happy to have this stick. It will also keep you company by being your friend that will stick next to you forever until your last days.

Overall, I think you should have this stick because it will help you, be a great pet toy and keep you company. That's why I think you should have a stick. So go to your local garden centre now and get the stick of you dreams!!!


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