For writing we have been learning about persuasive writing. Hope you enjoy!!!
New School, New look
Mr Moriarty, it’s time to get out with the old and in with the new. I believe if we get a new school, we should get a new uniform. Three reasons why we should get a new uniform are It is a new start, A show on who we really are and It can be a winter and summer uniform. Read on to find out some more information.
Firstly, we should have a new uniform because It's a new start for us. It is a new start because we can show it off to others who will come to our school. Another reason why is if we get a new school a new uniform would be the best way to go.
Secondly, we should have a new uniform because it is time to show who south hornby really is. If we do this it will attract other families and it will also show off the new you. This could really help to make our school popular.
Lastly, we should have a new uniform because it could be a winter summer uniform. It could be this if Mr Moriarty got Warmer thicker clothes for winter and Light breezy clothes for summer.
Overall, I think We should get a new uniform because It is a new start, A show on who we really are and It can be a winter and summer uniform. I think if we get a new uniform it would be a great change for this school.
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