Plan For Uniform

For writing this week I posted a pecice of writing and this is my plan for it. I hope you can see the learning and the hard work i have put into this.

Plan

Introduction Hook Mr Moriarty, it’s time to get out with the old and in with the new. What is the argument? I believe if we get a new school, we should get a new uniform.
	Elaborate, explain or give evidence
Main Point Paragraph 1 New Start	Show Off our uniform to others If we get a new school a new uniform is the best way to go
Main Point Paragraph 2 Time to show who South Hornby really is	Attractive to other families Show off the new you
Main Point Paragraph 3 Winter summer Uniform	Warmer thicker clothes for winter Light breezy clothes for summer
Conclusion / Summary Overall, I think We should get a new uniform because It is a new start, A show on who we really are and It can be a winter and summer uniform. I think if we get a new uniform it would be a great change for this school.