Today in wananga we had to do another 100 word challenge. We had to write it about magic bubbles. Here is my story.
I was walking through the dark back streets of San Diego when I saw something shiny behind one of the dumpsters. I ran towards it but then it disappeared! Then I turned around and saw a giant bubble with bright green dots as if they were eyes. I tried to pop it but when I did my finger just bounced off. But when I tried to kick it my foot went straight through so I stepped inside and I started floating! Then I saw flashing words saying where would you like to go? I said I wanted to go anywhere and that’s where we went.
This is a really nice story Hayley. I liked how you put where you were and what was happening really nice.
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kia pora hayley , i just wanna say i liked how you siad what was really happening in the story
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Hayley,
ReplyDeleteI really liked reading your 100 word challenge, it had heaps of detail and I really liked that you said where you were. You really went the extra mile to ensure it had interesting vocabulary.
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Shelby
Kia Ora Hayley,
ReplyDeleteI really like this blog post! I mainly like this blog post cause your words are interesting and I like the way it's layed out. I don't really have anything you could do next. Do you like 100 word storys ?
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Well done Hayley, great description of the giant bubble.
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