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Tuesday 30 June 2020

100 Word Challenge

Today in wananga we did a 100 word challenge. The photo was a big bear splashing in the lake with a seagull photo bombing. Here is my work with a photo so you get the idea. 

Story:

It was a normal day for me when I went to sleep but when I woke up everything was different.  I rolled onto the floor and very slowly I walked into the bathroom but when I saw my reflection in the mirror I screamed because I was a huge and scary bear! Then before I knew it the floor was opening up beneath me and I struggled to get my footing so I fell through into a big lake and made a huge splash. Now I live my life as a brown bear in the forest catching fish for fun. 


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4 comments:

  1. Unknown30 June 2020 at 12:39

    Hi Hayley

    Thanks for sharing your great 100 word story. I like the ending where you've thrown a bit of a plot twist. Did you enjoy doing this activity in class today? I would like us to continue this into Term 3!

    - Miss Birtch

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  2. Mum30 June 2020 at 13:16

    Great story Hayley :) Bears can be so cuddly

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  3. Grandma1 July 2020 at 08:59

    Love your story Hayley. Being a brown bear you would catch more fish than Pappies.

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  4. Anonymous1 July 2020 at 09:28

    Cool story, I can you/bear having fun catching fish, the photo adds dimension.
    From Gran.

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