autum writing

Adjectives

Similes

My favourite sentence

Attempt 1: Autumn is a season. In autumn the weather starts getting colder because it’s almost winter. Leaves fall off the trees so new leaves can grow. The leaves change colour because they are dieing. The days get shorter and the nights get longer so we get better sleep. Animals start to hibernate because they can cover from the cold. Some animals start to migrate to other countries.

Attempt 2: Autumn is a colourful season. In autumn the weather starts getting freezing cold because it’s almost winter. Leaves fall off the hard and frosty trees so new leaves can grow. The crinkly leaves change colour because they are dieing. The hot days get shorter and the cold nights get longer so we get better sleep. Animals start to hibernate because they can cover from the freezing cold wind. Some animals start to migrate to warmer countries.

Attempt 3:Autumn a multicolored season. In autumn the weather starts getting frosty cold because it’s almost winter. Leaves fall off the chilly,cold trees so beautiful new leaves can grow. The leaves change colour because they are getting all bronze and crinkly and then dieing. The scorching hot days get shorter and the chilly get longer so we get better sleep. The beautiful birds start to hibernate to warmer countries.

Attempt 4:Autumn is a bright and colorful season. In autumn the weather starts getting colder because it’s almost winter. Leaves float of the trees like a astronaut landing on the moon. The leaves change colour like a chameleon. The days get shorter and the nights get longer so we get better sleep. Animals start to hibernate because they can cover from the cold. Some animals start to migrate to other countries.

Attempt 5:Autumn is a beautiful and multicolored season. In autumn the weather starts getting bitterly cold because it’s nearly winter. Leaves fall off the branches and then new buds form for the spring. The leaves change colour before they fall to the ground. The days get shorter and the nights get longer and we snuggle up in bed. My cat Max’s fur grows thicker to keep her warm. Some animals and birds start to migrate by flying thousands of kilometers to other countries.