I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Today in English we wrote a 100 word challenge. We had to write it about a girl named Stracey and how she found out why no one went into the class room number 12. I put a bit of a horror twist on it so it was very fun to read. Enjoy :)
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
Great story! I love your use of describing words Hayley.
ReplyDeleteWell done! These 100 word challenge work so well for you. I look forward to the next one.
ReplyDeleteNice work Miss Rusbatch!
ReplyDelete