I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Today in English we had to write a poem. We had to make it that you didn't know what it was until you were told. I am actually very proud of my poem. It is about a Lemon and It's Tree. Enjoy :)
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Such a lovely poem Hayley.
ReplyDeleteThis is so well thought out. I agree with Grandma, a lovely poem. Hayley. Congratulations with your play of words. :)
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