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Thursday 25 July 2019

Hurumanu Art

Today for art we are working on our narratives for our stop motions. We had to pick a buddy from the other class and work with them to edit their writing and my own. Here is my finished narrative.

The three excited girls walked to school that morning. It was the first day of school for them,
they were starting middle school. Sylvie, the girly girl of the group, loved clothes and make up,
and she was also SUPER rich! Meadow was the sporty one out of all the girls. She liked playing all sorts of sports and she was sort of rich because of Sylvie. Amber was an average girl who had no
special talent. Ambers family was poor but Sylvie supported her. But one day everything was going to change…

After class had finished all the girls were going to hang out but then Amber said “ I have to go
to a study group” The girls said “ Ok bye” Sylvie and Meadow went to the field and had a picnic. Sylvie had a surprise for Meadow. Once the girls had eaten her yummy snack
Sylvie had a present for
Meadow. Meadow said “Thanks Sylvie” “Your welcome” said Sylvie. Meadow was about to open her present but then the bell rang. “ I will open it when I get home” Exclaimed
Meadow. When period 5 had finished everyone in the school went home. Meadow wanted to run home because she was excited to open her present. When meadow got home she ran
straight to her room and went to her desk. When she opened the present she gasped. “AIRPODS!!!!” she shouted. The next day when the girls were at school Meadow ran
up to Sylvie she gave her a hug and said “ THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!” 

The next day Sylvie had gotten a present for Amber. It was in a similar pretty box, like
the one that she got Meadow. Amber was so pleased when she found our that Sylvie
had gotten her a new car! Amber was so happy she wanted to thank Sylvie, but
she was gone! Amber asked Meadow if she had seen Sylvie but she hadn't. They looked everywhere
for her but by the time they started, it was time to go home. 

When Amber and Meadow got to school that morning they saw something they
didn’t think they wanted to see. Sylvie was wearing a paper bag dress, no shoes and her hair was in a mess. They asked what happened and Sylvie replied in a weak voice “ I ran out of
money to buy food and clothes” So Meadow and Amber made a plan. “ We should give back the gifts that we got from Sylvie to the store she got them from and give her that
money” Said Meadow. “That’s a great idea!” exclaimed Amber. So after school
Amber and Meadow walked to the shops where she got them from and got over
$100,000 for Sylvie to buy food and clothes. So after school Amber and Meadow walked to the shops where she
got them from and got over $100,000 for Sylvie to buy food and clothes. They
ran up to Sylvie and gave her the money and said “ We thought you needed
this to survive” “Thank you!” She whispered. 

This was the story of the Kindness Boomerang.

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