This week for writing we had to write about summer in a poem this my summer poem.
That Was Summer!
I remember smelling.. my Dad’s colorful citrus cookies.
I remember tasting… the sweet, sour strawberry Ice creams.
I remember seeing… flowers with bees buzzing around collecting the sweet honey.
That was summer!
I remember feeling… the sweat dripping down my burning hot face.
I remember hearing.. the loud rough waves through the dainty sea shells.
That was summer!
Wow! That is really cool! I like how you added lots of adjectives to paint a vivid picture in my mind. Next time, you could probably elaborate a bit more by saying where the thing is, like, the waves on the beach . I have done something a bit like this before, So basically, I liked your amazing piece of work.
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