I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
This week for hurumanu art we have been looking at the illustrator Quentin Blake. Quentin Blake illustrated books for Roald Dahl. We had to find out 5 facts about Quentin Blake and we had to put them in a DLO. Here is my Quentin Blake DLO.
Ka pai, Hayley! Awesome work putting your research into your own words. I also like the bits of information you included in your introduction explaining to your reader that we have been looking at Quentin Blake's work in art. If you had more time to work on your DLO, what would you add to improve it? You worked well in the short time frame we had.
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Ka pai, Hayley! Awesome work putting your research into your own words. I also like the bits of information you included in your introduction explaining to your reader that we have been looking at Quentin Blake's work in art. If you had more time to work on your DLO, what would you add to improve it? You worked well in the short time frame we had.
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