For writing this week we had to use this a picture of a man on the top of a really high building. We had to name him and I called him Fred. We had to plan what he did before, after and during. Then we could put language features in to make it interesting.
Fred The Brave
Fred the brave was bored, so he got up and walked down the street. He felt like climbing a building so… he climbed some and he felt like the super spiderman! While he was climbing he saw a unquestionably high building. Do you know what he did? He started to climb it!!! Before he left home he had packed a few beers. So when he got to the top of that absolutely high building he stopped and had some. Then he … slipped and died!!!
The next day he had a funeral with all his family. They cried then they died! They missed Fred very much they wanted him back. So i guess he wasn't fred the brdjerw AHHH there is something coming out of the coffin!! They started to run away but, Fred's mother saw Fred walking towards her! HE WAS ALIVE it was amazing and fred said “ i am never going up THAT high ever again!”
Fred The Brave Is Very Brave, But The Thing Is That NO ONE SHOULD EVER GO UP THAT HIGH, I would NEVER go up that high,The only time I've seen the city from a high place is on a plane.
ReplyDeleteNext time add pictures, they make the writing look interesting and cartoon looking
DeleteThanks Mediana. I will add pictures next time to make interesting.
ReplyDeleteThank you
Hayley