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Friday 28 July 2017

Greedy

WALT: Write predicting pieces
This week we had to predict what the rat was going to do with the bucket of red currents.


Greedy

¨Don't take these magical, yummy treats from me!¨… Their mine all mine …

Bob the hairy Rat woke up this morning and he felt a little hungry. So he got up and headed for the streets. He looked through the houses but he couldn't find anything. Then he went and looked in the barn and he found something that looked so magic and yummy…. Red Currants! He scurried up to them and started scoffing his face! Then he saw a face lurking in the shadows so he ran home. He couldn't run fast because he ate too much!

By the time he got home it was noon and was he full he tried to get into his home but he was too big! So he had to go work-out at the gym. When he got home he was so tired he went straight to bed and he said ¨I shouldn't have eaten all those currents!¨

When he woke up he was still quite chubby. Then suddenly he felt a feeling, a feeling he has never felt before. He was thinking and thinking and trying to figure out what this feeling was. Then finally he figured it out he was a … GREEDY RAT!

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