I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Well done Hayley. It was nice to have you sit beside me and we were both working :) You have put a lot of thought into your slides. Summer's quote relates to all sorts of suitations. Well done on adding that in
Great work Hayley. You have grasped the messages in the movie extremely well which means you are going in to your teenage years with a good understanding of people's feelings .keep up the good work.
Well done Hayley, This is some very impressive work. I really like that you have covered a variety of characters to give you a wider knowledge base to draw from. I wonder if there was a character you felt you could relate more to then the others? Keep up the hard work.
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Well done Hayley. It was nice to have you sit beside me and we were both working :) You have put a lot of thought into your slides. Summer's quote relates to all sorts of suitations. Well done on adding that in
ReplyDeleteGreat work Hayley. You have grasped the messages in the movie extremely well which means you are going in to your teenage years with a good understanding of people's feelings .keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteWell done Hayley, This is some very impressive work. I really like that you have covered a variety of characters to give you a wider knowledge base to draw from. I wonder if there was a character you felt you could relate more to then the others? Keep up the hard work.
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